Hey! Good work so far! It keeps improving with every revision. The main thing I would adjust here is the proportions of the characters. Darth’s head felt a bit too large, especially when comparing the scale and distance between him and the character in front. For the scale to feel more convincing, I think Darth should be slightly smaller than Ahsoka (it is Ahsoka, right? haha). I also tried correcting the arm positioning a bit, especially the foreshortened arm. Foreshortening is definitely tricky, I’ll admit that haha. As for Ahsoka: technically, we should only be seeing the right arm, not the left one, since the left arm would be mostly hidden by the body and the head from this angle. Showing too much of it makes it feel a bit disconnected from the body. The way I sketched it isn’t perfectly correct either, but it’s mainly to show how the head and torso should overlap and cover part of the arm. Hope this helps!
