Hey there! The scene overall looks good! I really like the idea of the truck-mermaids haha. I think you could add a third value to increase volume and reinforce the shadowed areas where you used hatching. Personally, I think it looks stronger this way, although I should mention I’m definitely not an expert in this comic style hehe. Another thing: I noticed this while writing this feedback, but you could play around more with the size variation of the trucks. Right now, they all share a very similar size, so there isn’t much variation in terms of big, medium, and small. Playing more with those size differences could create stronger visual interest and even add a bit more depth to the scene. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback