Hello there! I really like the idea here! The main issue is that the perspective of the horse and the character doesn't match the perspective of the scene. Both of them appear to be following a different perspective, when in theory we should be seeing more of their upper surfaces since the camera is positioned above them, or at least that's what I assume your intention was. This is especially noticeable on the horse. Remember that you can start by building the figures with simple forms first. Doing so allows you to solve the perspective problems before worrying about the final drawing. Once the structure is working correctly, you can clean up the sketch or draw over that foundation. I also made the character a bit smaller because it felt strange for the character to appear larger than the horse. Hope this helps!
