Hey there! Nice work here! Just a few small corrections. The character's eyes were a bit too close together, and the nose lacked volume due to the way the under-nose area was drawn. It ended up looking somewhat flattened. As for rendering with pen: I'm definitely not the best person to teach this technique, in fact, it's something I've started practicing more myself since I used to avoid this technique before lol. However, one thing I can suggest is to always think about the form and direction of the shapes you're drawing. Following the direction and flow of the forms will help you avoid making random marks or strokes that contradict the underlying structure. You can also study artists who have a strong command of this technique, such as Antonio, and pay attention to how they approach their mark-making. Learning from their process can help you apply similar ideas to your own drawings. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback