i really like the pose here! i think overall you have good proportions, and i'm impressed with how thin your linework is on this piece. im mostly going to focus on critiquing anatomy in my post because i don't have good advice on rendering/color. one thing i noticed in the bent arm is that the skin between the bicep and forearm could overlap a bit more. this is my personal style, but in the above sketch i tried adding more defined curves in the waist, arms, legs, and stomach, to make the post more striking! to me, this pose is complicated because the character is sideways, so drawing this without rotating the canvas is tough! i think this is really cool for this to be your first finished piece, keep it up!! | Artwod Feedback