I feel that so far your drawing is nice. Your lines have a good quality and smooth. (remind me of Loomis drawings) I think what's betray your drawing are the feet and their position. I redraw them and also I notice that your proportion are different from the upper body to the lower body Your character is a little to beef so I shorten slightly the left shoulder so it seems more natural (character dsaty beef but not with the extra ;) ) If you still find it too stiff, you can apply gesture on every limbs you deem fit for it. Also the character seems to move forward so I think that's also a component for what it looks off. Hopefully this feedback help. Don't hesitate to reach me if you have more questions. Good work ! | Artwod Feedback