I think overall, you did a great job in structuring your volumes and I think you get the idea of reproducing a pose. Silouhette is nice and readable. Regarding the Horizon line, here I think you can put it inbetween. (around the pelvis like the character was sitting) One trick you can try, if you're unsure how the model is placed in the environment is to draw simple forms related to your character to give more sense to the space you're in. Here I simply draw a box under her and it feels ok. (not perfect, but close to what the view might be) and before that I tried and estimate the Horizon Line. Regarding your head, Ribcage and Pelvis, I think you also did a good job, the only catch here is that some parts of the reference are exaggerated and so you basically draw your character with "regular proportions" where there is exaggerations here and there. (for example: Torso vs Pelvis or also the Hands) I think your approach is working fine so far, you will have to adapt it the more you learn new tools. It's about using them from time to time, adapting them to your workflow and every artist use them differently and at different point of their process. You just need to use them in order to see which one fit your tool box (it's like cooking. The more you'll do it, the less you need to look at the recipe in order to get it right and/or adapt it your way) I can see the arms and the legs were a struggle for you. You nailed part of it, but I suggest you to retrace from the reference in order to figure what's going on. I did a lot of retracing in order to get most of my figure right before I got better at figuring my 3D space. On the side, I also suggest you do a lot of pages with 3D forms related to each other. You can begin with simple compositions and the more you'll get comfortable, the more you can get complexe with them. Hope this feedback is usefull. Don't hesitate if you have any questions. | Artwod Feedback