Hello hello, late for the party but I hope this feedback will find you. Nice piece! You have a nice silhouette, with a nice composition and very playfull character. I also love your style. So what I noticed at first is that we are in a 3 point view looking downward at the lady. (let me know if I'm wrong) I decided to push that aspect by forcing her body in the 3rd point perspective. you can see the head is now more looking upward, which gives you more of the illusion of 3rd point perspective. I also forced the bust so we can clearly see more of it and less of the pelvis region. I also forced the doorway entrance a bit as well and the twist in her body so the silhouette his more expressive and reinforce that S shape you try to convey in the composition rythm. I'll suggest you to switch your expression bubble on the left so you have a better lecture again from left to right and for the hair, I shrunk the pony tail, but you can definitely redraw it the same size you did. I just wanted to show you that the hair are still attach with a hair rubber band and therefor, you have a direction for those hairs and we should see them even in your graphic shape. Last but not least, I feel in term of storytelling, you can play more with her expression. Even with the mask on her face we should learn what are her intensions. I drew 3 different expressions on the side, to show you it can change the mood of the scene and the intension. I didn't work out around the fabric but consider looking for some underwear and how they fold based on the movement of the legs. Really love the fact that you brought stripes on the socks, it gives a lot of clarity and readibility of the forms. Great work so far ! Feel free to reach me, I'll be glade to answer any questions. Cheers! | Artwod Feedback