Hey! I wanted to adjust the pose a bit overall, since some parts felt slightly off, especially around the upper torso and the arms. The arms suggest that one is positioned forward while the other moves backward, but the torso itself remains completely straight. Naturally, when making a pose like this, the torso creates a slight twist. You can notice that through the long “S” curve I indicated along the torso. On top of that, because there isn’t a clear separation between the deltoid, upper arm, and forearm, the arms end up feeling too short or too small overall. Ideally, you want to define the muscle groups a bit more clearly so the different masses feel more readable and believable. I’d also recommend showing at least part of the neck. Without it, the head feels disconnected from the body. Hope this helps!
