Hey! Good work here! The main issue I see is that there isn’t enough shadow contrast yet, which makes the image feel a bit flat. What I did was paint darker shadows, since that helps define the volumes much more clearly and creates a stronger contrast between light and shadow. On top of that, to help separate the character from the background — especially in the darker areas, I added a bit of green fog so the silhouette stands out more clearly. I also pushed the highlights a bit more in the hair, the hand, and slightly in the eye. I added some small highlights to the letters as well to give them more of a golden effect. Hope this helps!











