Hey there! You already have a solid foundation, but if you want the pose to feel more “alive,” I’d recommend pushing the 3/4 perspective further and exaggerating the gesture a bit more. Notice that I drew a subtle blue line flowing through the body; this is meant to indicate the line of action of the pose, which helps establish the overall flow and movement of the figure. Indicating the tilt of the pelvis and shoulders can also help give the pose more personality and dynamism. Also, notice that the right arm (the one resting on the waist) needs to follow perspective as well. It shouldn’t be drawn as if we’re viewing it completely from the front. Instead, the upper arm should angle slightly backward while the forearm points more toward the viewer. Hope this helps!
