Yo! I really like the scene! :D Several aspects could be improved, but I’ll focus only on composition. First of all, I’d recommend avoiding flat backgrounds. They tend to weaken the scene because there’s a disconnect between the 3D elements (like the characters and the lamp above) and flat elements like the wall and the door. Even if you’re using one-point perspective, try to give the environment more volume. This will also help you draw the characters more convincingly. Speaking of the characters, I made both of them smaller to better place them within the scene. This way, we can see the full body of the standing character, and I adjusted the size of the seated character to match the height of the door—before, they looked taller than the door. To add more depth, consider placing elements in the foreground—things like barrels, trash cans, etc. Anything that helps support the environment’s storytelling. Hope this helps, and keep practicing!
