Hey there! Well done here! :D Be careful with the body proportions. Notice that the arm is quite long while the torso is a bit small. At the same time, the legs are very thin, which makes it look a bit odd if your goal is a more realistic drawing. The face looks flat because it isn’t following the round form of the head. The lips should follow that curvature as well. The eyes are also too close together. Remember that the tear ducts usually align with the wings of the nose. You could also take a photo of yourself following the same angle as your character and use it as a reference, then simply adjust the proportions to match your character. The armor looks good, but it might stand out more if you made the shoulder pads bigger. You could even design them with the shape of an owl’s head on the larger shoulder pieces; it could look really cool. Also, follow the direction of the body when drawing the armor so the volume feels convincing and it doesn’t look flat. Hope this helps!
