Hello there! Sorry for the delay in getting back to you with feedback. Overall, the piece looks good, but I'm not entirely sure what the focal point is supposed to be. At first, I thought it was the large rock formation on the right, but because of the amount of space between the character and that structure, it also gives me the impression that the focal point might be somewhere in the background. Anyway, here's what I adjusted: I defined the structure more clearly and tweaked the values. Notice that I moved the rock formation slightly to the left, bringing it closer to a rule-of-thirds position rather than having it sit so close to the edge of the canvas. This helps give it more visual importance. I also clarified its shape so that the silhouette reads more clearly. I preferred removing the clouds from the upper portion of the image and instead painted some clouds lower in the scene, which, in my opinion, helps sell the sense of depth much better. You'll also notice that the background values are lighter, which helps create a stronger feeling of atmospheric depth in the environment. I liked the previous suggestion of adding a log in the foreground, so I incorporated that idea as well. It helps draw attention to the character while also suggesting distance and depth between the foreground element and the character. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback