Hey there! Sorry for the delay in getting back to you with feedback. Overall, the piece is looking good, but the lighting feels inconsistent. You currently have two light sources, one on each side, and the face is lit as if there were an additional soft light coming from the left, even though both existing light sources are already quite intense. What I did was illuminate the face's frontal planes, since they are fully exposed to the light from the left hand. On the opposite side, I only lit parts of the ear, some of the hair, and portions of the clothing. This allows the side plane of the face to remain in shadow, which helps suggest volume and prevents the character from looking flat under the influence of both light sources. I also darkened the clothing a bit so that the light effects would stand out more clearly. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback