Hey there! So cool! Love the concept and the drawing so far :D Two main things. I'd draw more of the character to avoid cutting the arms. In my opinion, it would be best if you showed up to the middle of the torso, so that the entire upper body is visible. On the other hand, there's too much detail, and it was quite hard to find the hand the bird is resting on. Again, due to the amount of detail, the hands get lost. You can separate the forearm a bit more to leave more space between the arm and body; therefore, leave a space for the silhouette. Make sure the branches you've drawn on the neck follow the proportions or perspective of the trapezoid (the ones on the character's left side look a bit wide). And follow the center line of the torso so you can give it more volume and prevent it from looking flat (referring to the central part of the costume). And regarding the details. Draw more detail where the focal points are and leave some rest areas on the non-focal interest. Keep in mind the line weight as well. Draw thicker lines in the focal point and where the shapes overlap (like the hand holding the staff and the staff), and use thin lines for inner details. Hope this helps!
