Hello there! Great work so far! The main issue here is that some of the body proportions feel slightly off. For example: The chest is too small, which makes the head feel slightly oversized The hand and forearm are too short The hands and feet feel too large in comparison to the rest of the body By correcting these proportions, the figure would feel much more balanced. For instance: The head would be slightly smaller and better aligned with the body There should be roughly one head’s worth of spacing between the head and chest structure The arm would be slightly longer, which naturally extends the forearm as well The feet size would be reduced for better proportional harmony On another note: The sword’s perspective was also off. It was drawn as though it were pointing backward, when based on the pose, it should instead be projecting forward. Hope this helps!
