The drawing is great with lots of character and a good impression. Four main areas but bear in mind that depending on the style this may have been intentional on your part so pick whatever you think is helpful. 1 - Cropping the character just below the belt line seems awkward, I would include the full character including legs. 2 - Avoid lines that touch or nealy touch, best to overlap to provide better depth. 3 - Avoid scratchy or multiple lines, fine when creating a sketch but best to then start new layer and do single flowing lines to get a neater finish. 4 - Consistent shading with neat edges. Your shading is in certain parts like the band on the hat but not the had itself, on the tongue but not the teeth. Draw the light source and direction (just as a guide, erase when done) then imagine where the the light would be obscured then draw the darker colour in these areas. Easiest thing is to use lasso tool with multiply layer to quickly block in. | Artwod Feedback