Hey! I’ll focus mainly on the structure of your characters, since the proportions are slightly off, particularly the face of the character and the woman’s shoulder. Try to draw a simple but solid base for each character to make sure the proportions are correct. If you look closely, the chin on your character ended up a bit crooked. This happened because you tried to draw the lower part of the chin using a strange curve, when in reality, we wouldn’t really see that area since the character isn’t tilting their head that much. Also, in your drawing, you’re not leaving enough space for the other side of the face, which makes it look a bit strange and flat. Even if the hair covers that area, make sure the nose and mouth are properly aligned with the center of the head. Ideally, you should show a bit more of the nose as well. As for the female character: The shoulder is placed too high, which makes it look disconnected from the torso. The shoulder wouldn’t rise to that height unless the body were leaning toward the opposite side. Because of that, I lowered it slightly so it sits closer to the level of the chin. Also, try not to crop the character’s fingers. It’s usually better to reduce the size of the characters instead of cutting off limbs that way. Hope this helps!
