Hey there! I would just emphasize the gesture a bit more. Instead of having the body leaning to the side, it would be better if the torso leaned slightly forward, since when we naturally take this kind of pose, the body tends to lean forward to maintain better balance. You’ll also notice that I emphasized the line of action of the leg a bit more. I looked up some poses of the character, since I’m not very familiar with them, and I found some interesting ones—especially the way they hold the cigarette. So I thought it might work well if the character were holding the cigarette instead of keeping the hand in the pocket (because of the camera angle, we wouldn’t see the arm anyway). I also adjusted the painting a bit. Keep in mind that if the light is coming from below, only the areas directly exposed to the light will be affected by it, the rest should remain in shadow. Hope this helps!
