@fosco

Paintover

Hey! So cool entry! :D Love the colours and dynamis! :D My drawing isn’t that great today, haha (one of those days when the hand isn’t connected to the brain lol). So, sorry if something looks odd. But anyway, I tried to make the pose a bit more dynamic (I think). Usually, it’s more interesting to see a C-curve gesture in the body rather than a straight line. In my opinion, one way to achieve this is by tilting the shoulders and the hips so that a “C” shape forms along the body, almost like the person is walking, and you’re exaggerating the movement a bit. Another option would be to place the pose in a 3/4 view, which could also add some personality. In general, when you’re designing poses, think about three main lines: - the shoulder line - the hip line - the line of action running through the body If all three are parallel, the pose tends to feel stiff. If they’re different, the pose feels more alive. Hope this helps!

This is so beautifully rendered and your coloring technique is so expressive. I feel like some areas of improvement could be in your line work. I like how it has a sketchy vide and think it pairs well with your rendering style but i think you could Bennie it from making your strokes a bit more assured and confident. Also making sure you are drawing all the way through the form and not stoping because another body part it intersecting or interrupting the shape. Ex: make sure to draw the entire torso, then draw the chest on top, then ad the arms before erasing unnecessary detail. Last, I think the stamp tool lacks control and is overwhelming and distracting from the beautiful rendering of the character. I think less is more and possibly playing with blurring foreground shapes and adding contrasting like, like a yellow orange on the right would have been more complementary. In procreate you can alter the spacing certain plush tools have to give you more control in the brush settings or you can play with size and pen -reassure and speed which is what i did. I defined the pupils a bit to make her gaze look more focused. Slimed the neck, filled in the gaps in the hair a bit and outlined a slightly more proportionate waist as it pertains to shoulder width.

@fosco

Paintover

As for the painting, I’d brighten up the face a bit more. But mainly, I’d reduce the saturation of the background. It bothers me to have saturated colours in both the background and the character. That's my opinion. Hope this helps! :)