Hello there! The pose works well overall, but there are a few things that make it feel a bit off. The neck isn't properly connected to the head. The neck itself follows a diagonal direction, but the way you indicated it with an open line, as if the cylindrical form of the neck were flaring outward to the sides, makes it look unusual. Another issue is the way the trapezius muscles and shoulders were drawn. From what I understand, the character's right arm is slightly raised, while the left arm is in a more neutral position. Because of that, it would be better to maintain a diagonal line through the shoulders and keep a similar diagonal relationship in the elbows as well. The pose feels much more natural this way. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback