Interesting drawings, and definitely kinda dark! I like all of them, but the character in the center is my favourite I made a few adjustments to the proportions. The head felt a bit too large compared to the size of the torso, so I corrected that slightly. I know this is a more experimental piece, so I suppose perfect proportions aren't necessarily the priority as long as the idea comes across clearly... :) I also adjusted the hand, since the perspective and shading felt a little off. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback