Hey! Good work so far! The main issue overall is proportions. In many of the figures, the head is a bit too small, which makes the neck feel longer than it should. Also, in some cases the deltoids are too small, remember that the deltoids should roughly match the length of the chest. There’s a simple method I like to keep in mind when drawing the upper body: the rule of thirds. Divide the upper body into three equal parts: from the top of the head to the neck ribcage abdomen and pelvis Thinking this way helps you keep the head at a proper size and prevents the neck from becoming too elongated. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback