Hey! Really nice work so far! What I’d recommend for now is focusing a bit more on anatomy and proportions. The facial proportions feel a bit off. The cranium is too elongated, which makes the jawline feel stretched and pushes the ear too far back (and it’s also a bit small). Using the Loomis head as a base is always a great way to keep proportions more consistent. On another note, I adjusted the pose slightly since it felt a bit stiff (too straight). What I did was add more gesture—notice how the front of the torso stretches into a longer “C” curve, while the back forms a tighter, inverted “C.” It’s subtle, but it helps prevent the pose from feeling rigid. Also, the arms and legs felt a bit too long. Try making the window background lighter—almost white (around 90%). This will give you a stronger contrast between the figure and the background, since right now they’re too close in value. Hope this helps!
