Hey there! You already have a solid base. It’s mostly a matter of adjusting the proportions a bit and fixing a small detail. The main issue is the way you drew the arm that’s holding the sword—it’s too long. Keep in mind that when the arm is raised, the size of the trapezius and the deltoid appears slightly reduced. In your drawing, the shoulder has the same size it would have if the arm were in a neutral position. Because of that, the upper arm and forearm ended up being extended too much. The hand also shouldn’t be rotated that way. If you try to mimic that pose yourself, you’ll notice it’s quite uncomfortable to hold the hand like that. Because of that, we wouldn’t see the entire dorsum of the hand—only the fingers and part of the palm. Try to better define the lower part of the torso as well, maybe by indicating the obliques, the navel, and the abdomen. This will help avoid the torso looking flat and create a better transition between the torso and the ghostly lower body. Hope this helps!
