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This is my first time using the feedback tool, so forgive me if I make any mistakes while using this. I drew this pic as a last-minute submission to actually complete SOMETHING. It's not pretty or neat or anywhere near completion, but the point of it to actually have something to show that I'm genuinely drawing and being more proactive on Artwod and using my skills. That having been said, my biggest hurdle right now is the sense of perspective with the umbrella. It's transparent in the original reference I have but I can't make heads or tails with it's "spokes" or whatever they're called. It's been a LONG time since I last made any sort of illustration digitally, so any advice, umbrella related or not, is highly appreciated. Thanks for the taking the time to read this and constructively critique my drawing!

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