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I really liked what I have done with this. This is the most ambitious painting I have done so far. I kept the items, the color palette and the overall feeling. I rework the composition to accentuate the peace of the scene. I rework the perspective and camera position to add more flowing movement (while keeping the slowness) I tried to work on values and silhouette of the character. I still struggled with the shadow mapping and the question : do I keep realist and put the focus in too deep shadow, or do I keep the character light but it is a bit of a stretch with ambiant light. I would like pointers, especially on fondamentals like form, form indication and composition.

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