What can I improve?
Comic storyboard
Hi all, I’m trying to start working on a comic that has been in my head a while. I know I am far from ‘ready’ but gotta start somewhere so I’m starting basic layouts. This first panel is going for top down looking through the trees at a group training outside. 1. Does it feel correct if the viewer was a bird in on of the trees? 2. Any other notes are appreciated. Thanks!