What can I improve?
Don't know if it is valid to share the process of artwork instead of a completed art piece. Really sorry if not. Originally made for the mermaid challenge, i tried to use the opportunity to sharpen my design skills, got some feedback, improved in design , but ended up finding a major gap in my knowledge or form and structure
Adding this one here just in case rough construction distracted from main issue or made it harder to critique. Also , any other advise which would make my characters look less scary would be very appreciated. Anything general about construction or forms would also help.