What can I improve?
Manga panel practice
I was practicing one page comic/manga. I am trying to practice telling small stories - small event in order to slowly build up to multipage ones. the top 3 panels went well I feel like? the third panel top i like the most because I could apply the small - medium - big well from Arne's intermediate road which I have been enjoying. The bottom 2 were meant to be quick action-reaction - weapon draw to weapon/hand disabled. This evolved into what was meant to be a ricochet which I don't think really is readable. I learned a lot about perspective here. I would be grateful for any feedback - probably not understandable in terms of what was happening in bottom 2 panels I reckon?