What can I improve?
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A cleaned up version of the singer guy drawing from earlier. Added the texture to the microphone. Now... I think that each metal bar is too big an exaggerated, the pros definitely could've gone smaller with the detail, and i feel like they don't wrap around the form well enough, maybe I got caught up in the detail, and maybe the eyes would be too far apart from another angle. And i drew the composition to
Lead the eye to the subject, but the space doesn't feel to cluttered, does it? Please let me know!