What can I improve?
Help for my childsbook
Hello, Sir Horus here,
i am currently working on a childsbook and i would like to get some feedback on some of it.
1. I would like to get feedback on my digital watercolor style do you think it works? the singing bird and the beaver are digital.
2. I would like to get feedback on some of my value / scene conzepts. the first one is the one on top (the 3 onse are all for the same scene) for explanation it is a scene before a race, main characters are the rabit, a snail, and a lady bug, around them there are other insects and animals cheering them up and a freog as a referee. I canot seem to find a good composition for that scene to get the focus on the main characters. .
the second scene with which i am mostly happy is a scene in which the snail sits on a branch with an owl with the lowering sun behind them for contrast. The last one ist the scene on the bottom left with the singing bird and her studens and the snail comming along to listen. I cant figure out how to have the focus on the snail firsdt then follow her line of sight to the singingbirds and then onto the students. in my current conzepts, the snail gets lost and focus is on the singingbird first.
3. I would also like to get feedback on the character concepts, mainly the rabit, beaver, owl, singingbird and the singingbirds students.
Thank you in advance
Greeting Sir Horsu