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Demon Merchant

I struggled with the pose and the anatomy the most. The only reference I used was for the pose but I deviated quite a bit from the original. It was an odd one with a woman standing on mechanical legs and I had no idea how to translate that to anatomy. I did have fun applying what I’ve learned from my form exercises. There are issues I have with it - awkward pose, weird anatomy, lantern’s too big, boring perspective, etc. I learned that I should try to rough in the shapes and composition to get the big picture down first. That way I can decide what works and what doesn’t early on. I would love if someone more advanced could do a draw over with a more interesting perspective. It looks very “straight on” and I find it makes it boring to look at. I think a more interesting perspective could make the drawing more engaging for the viewer, but I’m not quite sure what that would look like. Of course, any feedback is welcome! Thanks for looking.

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