Hey there! I took the correction that Giraslash made already to the proportions :D I'm not the best at hatching things (a technique I didn't practice too often), but you have to follow the direction of the form so you can trace the lines according to it, instead of just drawing straight lines (you didn't to this tho). I said some other things on the video. But generally speaking, just follow the form of the body, and I'd recommend you to look at artists you like and mimic the way they do it :D Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback