This looks great! It looks quite good so far! I'd say that you should use a darker pencil (like a 2b or 4b) to paint darker shadows. Pick a reference from Frazetta (love his style) and mimic the way he painted the shapes. This will add more contrast and visual appeal. I did something quick, tho hehe. Use a thicker pencil to draw the lines of the contours for a better separation between the creature and the character. Especially the arms of the creature. Hope this helps! :)











