Hey there! Nice entry! I believe this is still a WIP. But some areas can be improved. The proportions are a bit off. Like the distance between the head and the chest is around 1 head and a half, the arm that's holding the sword is too long compared to the other arm. The legs were too long as well. So I tried to adjust the proportions. On the other hand, if it weren't for the line, the arm would blend in with the hair, since you have a “light-on-light” look, and the ideal is always to aim for “light-on-dark” or “dark-on-light” contrasts. I changed the sword's position. I prefer the idea of having the sword point in the opposite direction, which lets you play around with the composition a bit and have the cape or hair follow the same line as the sword, so that this gesture draws the eye back to the face, rather than just having the sword pointing downward. Hope this helps! :)
