Hello there. So beautiful illustration! I believe that the lighting is great, but you need to emphasize the "dark over light" on the character at the bottom more. If the light is coming from below, the face wouldn't be brighter but shaded. The same with the rest of the body that's not facing the light source. This way, you can get a better silhouette readability. Regarding the character at the top. For better contrast, I changed the colour of the cloak to a reddish one. A blue colour didn't contrast too much against the green of the leaves. The red one immediately tells you that there's something. Adding some dappled light would help a lot IMO Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback