Hey there! Nice drawing! :D Some things are off, like the connection between the hand and arm; it's a huge space, as you can see. The angle of the cigar's cylinder is wrong; we shouldn't see the front ellipse since it's not facing the viewer, but the character, we see the back ellipse. The hand that holds the lighter is a bit weird, too. So, I made a "quick" drawing trying to fix these problems. We should also barely see the right shoulder due to the camera angle; the face overlaps it. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback