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Working on the manipulated boxes grind node. Areas that I would like to be focused on are: The 2 C like shapes at the bottom. I feel that the sense of scale changes and I am not sure how to make the top and bottom C shape feel the same size. The other question I have is the stairs to the right of the 90 degree clockwise turn. The aim was to have a 90 degree rotation from the bottom plane to the top but I am not sure how to do that with the amount of cutting out that the stairs requires.
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Working on the manipulated boxes grind node. Areas that I would like to be focused on are: The 2 C like shapes at the bottom. I feel that the sense of scale changes and I am not sure how to make the top and bottom C shape feel the same size. The other question I have is the stairs to the right of the 90 degree clockwise turn. The aim was to have a 90 degree rotation from the bottom plane to the top but I am not sure how to do that with the amount of cutting out that the stairs requires.

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