Hey there! So good! :D I don't know what the person looks like. But the head feels too flat. You didn't draw the form of the side of the head, where we can see the contour of the skull (cheekbone, forehead, jaw). Also notice that the ear is drawn too low (should be lined up with the nose line), and the back of the head is flat as well, it should be rounder. When drawing a portrait, either draw the simple Loomis head or keep in mind the Loomis head structure. Keep it up and hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback