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Hi! First of all good job! In the correction i just did what you said, i separated a little bit more the 3 planes to have a better reading with just a couple of layers with a grey put on screen mode. I wanna see how this develops! (i'm studying the same thing in these months, so i feel less alone when i see others encountering my struggles XD )
Hey! So cool scene so far! :D Something quick: I'd make the characters in the MG a bit smaller to let the composition breathe a bit since it felt "tight", so to speak, and make the characters in the FG slightly bigger and separate them a bit. You can even move the right one more to the left. Make the archer a bit smaller too, i left it a bit bigger hehe. Make the FG darker and the MG brighter for better separation between the planes . Hope this helps!
Improve your fundamentals, a 3 min read
Master comic storytelling by blocking shapes, simplifying forms into mannequins, imitating professional styles, then creating your own narrative-driven panels.
Rendering
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MJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!
don't tell me i spell it wrong cause i know that, i wasn't paying attention