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For this character drawing i wanted to have the character light a cigarette while walking as he makes a phonecall. The pose was supposed to make him come off as disorganized, nonchalant and carefree. I feel like the pose looks stiff and unrealistic even though i referenced myself. Especially from far away it reads oddly. I would really like some feedback on how i can improve the read of such a pose like this, so i can learn for the future.
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For this character drawing i wanted to have the character light a cigarette while walking as he makes a phonecall. The pose was supposed to make him come off as disorganized, nonchalant and carefree. I feel like the pose looks stiff and unrealistic even though i referenced myself. Especially from far away it reads oddly. I would really like some feedback on how i can improve the read of such a pose like this, so i can learn for the future.

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