Manga panel practice

I was practicing one page comic/manga. I am trying to practice telling small stories - small event in order to slowly build up to multipage ones. the top 3 panels went well I feel like? the third panel top i like the most because I could apply the small - medium - big well from Arne's intermediate road which I have been enjoying. The bottom 2 were meant to be quick action-reaction - weapon draw to weapon/hand disabled. This evolved into what was meant to be a ricochet which I don't think really is readable. I learned a lot about perspective here. I would be grateful for any feedback - probably not understandable in terms of what was happening in bottom 2 panels I reckon?

June 30 Sketchbook Pages Challenge Day 26

Just played the new Star Fox, and I had to do some fanart, because I was excited. The ship was a good challenge perspective wise, and I don't really draw animals that much so that was also interesting.

Sketch 25 - More heads

More heads from an asaro head reference.

Day 26

I tried to make a creature like "barguest. " I used a hippo and a heron. I made an attempt to create interesting shapes. Any recommendations ?

ciberpunk biker i guess

been messing around with giving actual backgrounds to my drawings and so far this is something i made today, the face is one of my biggest painpoints here since i haven't done the portrait road map yet but also if you have feedback as far as the background and shadows its welcome as well, the drawing itself is still not done so shadow and color wise i know there is more to be done but never the less ill take the feedback you got

Hammer roadmap

This is my attempt at the hammer for the roadmap I made a mistake on the orthographic view cuz I made the centre part not the handle stick infront of the 2 sides which made it much harder for me I would love if I could get any feedback and I also don’t rlly know if I did make it that interesting and cool beans in terms of design

June Sketch Day 26

My sketchbook almost full. Might want to buy new one. Still with the same practice. I kinda get the hang of it.

Japanese Food kart

Hi! I'm looking for some advice on design. The idea for the prop is a medieval Japanese food kart, its a fantasy world where we have giant sea animals and an old fisherman/chef that loves the sea brings us exquisite food from these giant beasts. Its a sketch so I know perspective needs some tweaks. I'm mainly looking for advice on shape design, and how can I make the design more interesting or professional. Thanks in advance :)

June 30 Sketchbook Pages Challenge Day 25

A smaller sketchbook day. I'm pretty happy with the improvement of my line quality, and I am still working on refining the mannequin in perspective.