Hey there! You’re on the right track! The separation between your planes is well handled, and the focal point is clear and readable. That said, here’s a suggestion: I would take advantage of the circular spiral composition to create more dynamism within the scene, allowing those lines to guide the viewer’s eye toward the focal point. You could reinforce that movement by placing rocks or other elements that subtly point toward the focal area. On another note, the next step would be to start sculpting the forms to suggest volume and avoid having just flat planes. This involves thinking more intentionally about the lighting. A light source coming from the upper left could work well. Also, since the character is pointing upward, you need to define what they’re pointing at. That element should become your secondary focal point. It could be a ruined structure in the distance, a massive plant, or something else significant. Right now, the character is pointing… but we don’t know at what, or where they’re trying to go. Also, make the silhouette of the climbers a bit bigger, slightly bigger. Lastly, asking for feedback in a very general way can be a bit vague. It would help a lot if you could specify what you’re struggling with, what you’d like feedback on, or provide some context about the image. That way, we can give you more precise and useful critique. Hope this helps!
