So far I think you nailed the drawing. Proportions are nice and fair, volume and perspective is correct. I would just trace on the flat top of the remote to adjust all the button and volumes. (keeping construction lines will help a lot) Regarding the rendering, it's also nicely done. I would add that it's part confidence and part trying out different ways of hatching. You can also use the "Ghosting" technique, that consist in repeating without touching the paper your next line. When you feel more confident about this line, you trace it. No need to rush, take your time. Here's I'll put you a video from Proko, explainging this principal more in depth. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lTslVOUJ0jI&t=120s Great work ! | Artwod Feedback