@nils97866

“maybe block the seated figure as a few simple shapes first, then check the knee and shoulder angles against a center line before adding the values so the pose feels more balanced.”

“maybe start with a soft ball for each shoulder and hang the upper arm off that like a simple tube. right now the arm kinda starts near the neck so it never plugs in. once that ball is there the elbow ”

“color and outfit design are already past beginner honestly. the thing holding it back for me is depth, everything sits at about the same value so the bear and the coat blend. maybe pick one light dire”

“design wise she reads clear, the shy crybaby part maybe less so. both poses are kinda confident with the peace sign. one version with hands pulled in closer, shoulders up a bit, would sell that side. ”

“the glossy eyes already sell the new style. maybe the hoodie and the bunny are sitting in the same pink though, a cooler shadow under her chin would separate the hug and keep the face as the focus”

“the walk already reads well. maybe pin the folds to two or three points, shoulders and where it catches the leg, and let the rest hang. helps it feel like cloth reacting to the step instead of a flat ”

“the tilt already reads. maybe a darker plane under the chin and letting the hair wrap the skull would lock the angle in more than extra spikes”

“the mask already feels future facing. idk if the coat needs to match that though, a softer older looking coat might sell the prefers the past part”

“The peacock already does a lot of the colorful welcoming work. Could a quieter outfit on Sebastian keep him from getting lost?”