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@lonan30038
i am a sixteen yearold artist who has been doing art on and off for as long as i can remember but i hadn't realy gotten better until i found the best art learning tool ever... artwod (thanks for this format Antonio) and i recently started considering art as a serious career for my future, i'm on this feedback tool to find what i need to improve on and help others do the same
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“sorry i can't do a draw over cause it won't let me but try simply completely removing all light sources that are not blue. it looks crowded cause of the orange light so if you take it away or change ...”
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“this is good but it doesn't follow form/anatomy, the hips are to rounded, the legs are too thin and don't follow the pelvis. the clothes are not 3d they are just drawn on the body like its part of the...”
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“its a verry good ilustraition but zorro is to head on, if add forshortening and turn him more twords the shark than it will look more 3d. the beer mugs are not following the horizen line so if you mad...”
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“you're going in the right direction with the eyes, i can see you trying to understandthe eys and you're geting really close, try doing cross hairs on the spheres and the eyes would take up more space ...”
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“the eyes are pretty good and the nose is well drawn, but its at a different perspective than the rest, if we look at the 3d building block of the nose we'll see that its tipped to far lefti fixed that...”
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“its probebly because the pic on the left is and easyer perspective to draw in while the one on the right is quit a bit harder,personally i struggle with this too, the fix just draw the worst drawing e...”
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“i don't know if this is what you ment or wanted but adding an expresion get make a character much less boring”
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“you're going the right direction but the arms and leg are rectangls not cylinders like they should be. its really helpful to me to draw these maniqins of 3D shapes this is the way i draw them and i ho...”
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“with the three point perspactive the eye was jst two low, so i drew an eye line for you. it is a very well done portrait, and its also hard for me to get eye placment right lol. i love the nose its go...”
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“i love this drawing its very good and the details are well placed. the only thing that i found was off is the lower jaw, it was too flat, so i pulled it in and unflattend it, i also gave some refferen...”
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“the nose is to flat and at the wrong angle, he's tillting his head up and opening his mouth, his nose is a little down turned though so i tillted his nose up a little. over all this pic is really goo...”
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“the art work is very good and i love the style and vibe, the out fit is great but green is a hard color to work with, the only thing i would change is the arm the arm and the face tattoos, i made the...”
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