@ranii

“Hello! As far as rendering goes, I think there is an overuse of the soft brush. You should probably introduce some hard edges to balance out the airbrush-y effect that dominates your painting, either ...”

“Hi! First of all, I LOVE this piece. It’s so soft and elegant with a dash of ethereal look to it, and I hope I did it justice with the modifications. I darkened the birds to start it off, to give i...”

“I think it felt empty because the character wasn’t lit enough. I used the curve tool in procreate to amp up the contrast and the lighter values of the painting, and I think it does a pretty good job a...”

“Hello! Lovely piece! I thought the main character of the painting could benefit with taking up more space inside the canvas, she was a little lost in the negative space there, and darkened it a bi...”

“Hello! First of all, great painting! I really like how it’s coming along, it’s giving off Dell’Otto vibes to me. I don’t think the proportions are off, it’s rather a color issue in my opinion: I th...”

“Hey! Nice job with the overall proportions. The only two things that were off were the mouth alignment and the size and the shape of the iris. Pay attention to the shape in particular because the ro...”

“Your artwork is pretty strong already, I only used a sharp edged brush to bring out some more definition out of the shapes. I also put a darker tone on the eye to enhance the focal point, and darkened...”

“To avoid muddy shading, you cloud try picking a color that’s darker but more saturated than the midtone for the shadows, and one that’s lighter than the midtone but closer to the color of the light so...”