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@jacquelinevr
Been working as a 2D Generalist/Game artist for 10 years. ArtWOD member since 2021. My style is cartoony and more characterbased.
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“Very cool style! Maybe at some more depth to the black vampire cloak, because compared to the other bits its a bit flat. The building in top left could use more thickness in the battlements, bu...”
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“Very funny piece! I would move the fire to left, it add\s to the story but the location it was add it was lighting fire to his body. Changed the loincloth to have more shape and tried to fix th...”
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“Ye I really dig these! Nice loose sketches. You could do a whole collrection of them this month if you're into birds. It would make a lovely book.”
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“Really awesome drawing, so much is happening! I have a few pointers but since it's traditionally drawn i dont expect you to apply them. For future drawings you could perhaps do a primitive sha...”
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“That's a really cool study, the bird on her head is super cute too. I think anatomy, proportions is all fine, perhaps the legs where she is sitting can be improved. But you might want to work on y...”
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“It's cacti :D So I think getting it to feel dramatic is your challenge here. I would try some thumbnails first and see which works for dramatic purposes. A Dutch angle always seems to be more impre...”
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“It's a cool drawing! Could be a poster! The framing really works but ofcourse there's room for improvement (as always). You want to improve your hatching so that's the first step in improving It ...”
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“This is really bautiful and kinda hard to give feedback on! But I found something! The big shape in the right, I am not sure what it is and it touches the octopus, not sure if thats intented. I fe...”
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“Great work, looks really detailed and it's traditionally drawn which makes it tough to dedicate really dark shadows. I would leave the dark in the glaive's/spear out, because you use it as a shado...”
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“It's really good that you are challenging yourself with such a dynamic pose! Try using basic shapes and spheres first with a mannequin and then apply your mermaid on there. It's also really fi...”
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“I think you really challenged yourself with this piece. Your foreshortening, the design and then also all the enfironment with it! Looking at it tho, it's a bit hard to read that she's a mermaid. ...”
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“Seems like you're doing great research on your mermay. Since its only a day left I would just pick one of your designs and try to render that and don't worry about posing and composition at this momen...”
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“I really love the looseness and pose of your drawing, everything seems really solid already. It's hard to give feedback on it, but maybe push the tail back a bitmore. For the belly maybe add the ...”
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“What a cool design! As feedback I would suggest to use your design as a reference and then try to make a new more dynamic pose, using the mannequin workflow. Then draw your design on top of that. ...”
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“Grats on finishing a big piece like this! It's always an accomplishment and a step to becoming more skilled. I feel theres a few things which could improve it now which has to do with your renderin...”
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